You're right, I did very much enjoy this! Thank you for pointing it out to me. *g*
One small thing...you copied and pasted the sequence at the Magic Box into the story twice; you might consider fixing that as it was a tad confusing, especially after the hotness.
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Date: 2012-03-02 08:40 am (UTC)One small thing...you copied and pasted the sequence at the Magic Box into the story twice; you might consider fixing that as it was a tad confusing, especially after the hotness.